9.10 Editing Activity

1. Thanks to a very good diet, Sandra is always healthy.
2. The common cold can make you feel very miserable ; therefore, you should stay at home.
3. Although I have been maintaining a very healthy diet, I have been sick.
4. As a result of excercising regularly, she is in very good shape.
5. With excellent nutrition, a generous supply of vitamins, a lot of rest and plenty of excercise, you can be  healthy.
6. Not only is medicine important when you are sick but also you should take care of yourself.
7. The relationship between body and mind is very interesting.
8. Many doctors like my doctor charge very expensive rates.
9. The magazine that I read is about how to increase longevity through better health.
10.The sun shines my window, so I have plants in the window box.
11.I heard about an accupunture clinic which also has a specialist on herbal medicine.

You are beautiful

You should have come earlier
Or you should not have gone.
Until you jilted me,
All things were wonderful.
Returning is not simple.
Everything is all in pieces.
But you hurt me.
Every day, I fell in love with you
Although you were faraway from me
Utterly
Try to decide
If you love me or not
Farewell might be better 
Until we die.
Love is not always forever.

Reflection Task 1a

ALL ABOUT ME

Hi, I am  Canan. I am from  Turkey  and living in  Ankara which  is the capital of  Turkey. I  want  to mention  about  my university life , hobbies and  family. Firstly, I am  a student  at metu, and  my  department  is  foreign  language education. I  have  been studying at metu  for  about two years. I like  this university  very  much. If  I  had  won  another  school , I  would not  be  happy now.Moreover, there  are  a lot of  friends at metu.Thanks to my friends   and my university  facilities , my  life  is  more  interesting  and  funny.There  are  a lot  of  student  communities in campus.By participating them , I can make  new  friends  and  improve  myself. Also, I  am  staying  in  dormitory. It is really  a good  experience. I  think  everyone  should  try  it.Secondly, I  am an outgoing  and  social  person.I like trying  new and different  things.Since  last year, I have  tried  different  hobbies such as mountain  climbing, scouting, capoiera, history  and  media communities .Besides these hobbies, I will  enroll on  tennis  and painting  courses next semester.My all  hobbies  make me  happy  and  give the joy  of  life.Until I die, I will try  different  things.It is  my life  philosophy.Thirdly, I remain seperate from my  family. They are  living inanother  city.Sometimes I  miss them so much.Anyway, my father is 51 years old and a chauffeur.My mother is 47 years old and a housewife.Also, I have  two  sisters.Their names  are  Cansu  and Neriman.They  are  students,too. I  love  them  all so much. They  are  the most  invaluable  people  in  my life.