MY IDOL
There is a special and important person for most people. It may be a popular person or
There is a special and important person for most people. It may be a popular person or
a best friend.Whoever the person is, he/she has a
significant role in people’s life.Hence, I
want to talk about my special person.It may be nonsense for
most of you, but I admire to him.
He is
Kerem Bursin.Firstly, I want to mention about his life.When he was
10-month-old, he and his family
moved into Scotland.Then. they moved into Indonesia.After they had lived there
for a while,they
moved into Dubai.Then, he lived in Texas until he graduated from high school.I
think it is a very admirable
life.His journey hadn’t finished yet ,
and he went to Boston for his university education.He studied
at Emerson College in Boston.Kerem Bursin, who always has a interest for
acting, moved into
Los
Angeles after he had finished his
education.He came to light by maker Roger Corman.He acted Roger
Corman’s films such as Sharktopus and Ghost Of The Imperial Palace.Also, he took acting training
from Carolyn Pickman and Eric Morris.He has a good command of English, and he
can speak French
reasonably.Now he lives in Turkey.He acts a TV series known as Güneşi Beklerken.It
is myfavorite
series in Turkey.I am look forward to
watching it every week.By the way, he has many different
hobbies.These are horseriding,swimming,American football, basketball, tennis and
lakros.He
has travelled to many countries and lived there.Also,He is a real sportman.It
is difficult to meet with
a person like him.Thus, he is my idol, and I wanted to talk about him.
It is a part from the Sharktopus movie.You can watch his acting.
Can Canan,
YanıtlaSilYou are so sweet! I had to laugh when I saw you wrote about him, because we had talked about him the other day! I likes you paragraph! because it is very honest and informative about his life! Yourwriting skills are excelente! The content and grammer is very good! I only found very few minor flaws!
In the part: "didn’t finished yet , and he went to" I would suggest to write: didn’t finished yet , he went to...
In this part: "but I admire to him" it is; I admire him.
In this part:"I am look forward to" it is; I look forward
That is all I have found! Congratulations! You are a very good writer!